Comments on: Give Blood and Thanks: Chapter 1 http://dannymachal.com/give-blood-and-thanks-chapter-1/ Podcast fiction from a writer on the road to being published. Sat, 28 May 2011 05:38:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Darrell http://dannymachal.com/give-blood-and-thanks-chapter-1/comment-page-1/#comment-185 Darrell Wed, 06 May 2009 20:16:42 +0000 http://dannymachal.com/?p=198#comment-185 Well done! The dialogue and strict attention to detail is perfect. You were just descriptive enough without being over descriptive. I am off to Chapter #2. Well done!

The dialogue and strict attention to detail is perfect. You were just descriptive enough without being over descriptive. I am off to Chapter #2.

]]> By: Ferret http://dannymachal.com/give-blood-and-thanks-chapter-1/comment-page-1/#comment-183 Ferret Tue, 05 May 2009 00:12:54 +0000 http://dannymachal.com/?p=198#comment-183 Bit on the gory side there eh mate? Looking good - keep up the letterletting. Bit on the gory side there eh mate? Looking good – keep up the letterletting.

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